尊敬的領導：
Dear sir/madam,
和其他年輕人壹樣，我也在尋找壹份工作，或者說是尋找自己職業生涯的起點。
Like thousands young people, I am looking for a job, or you may say I am searching for a starting point of my career.
看到貴公司的招聘的信息以後我興奮不已，
I was so excited when I saw your “help wanted “notice.
因為我在大學期間對許多有發展潛力的企業非常關註，其中就有貴公司。
To be honest with you, I have been paying close attention to all those enterprises that have great potentials and your company is one of them.
我對貴公司銷售人員的職位向往以久。我在大學所學的專業就是市場營銷，除了學好本專業以為，
I have been looking forward to this day when I can become a member of your sales department. I consider it a great honor to be part of the team.
I majored in marketing sales. Not only I have a solid foundation in my field, but also I extend my interest to other areas like literature, philosophy , the strategies of management, the communication skills and the social skills etc.. When I was at college, I was very active in various social activities.我還註重自己綜合能力的培養，文學，哲學，法律，管理能力，溝通能力，交際能力等等。在校期間，我擔任班級組織委員，策劃並組織創建了學校的市場營銷協會。 I started a marketing sales club at college.
我深知作為工商管理類學生，交流、實踐不可或缺。我在上大學之前，
I know fully well that experiences and exchanges of ideas are so vital for a business management student. Before I went to college, I had had one year of experiences selling cosmetics due to the s financial difficulties of my family.
就因為家庭經濟原因曾經輟學從事銷售工作，有壹年多的化妝品的銷售經驗。大學期間，每個假期我都在壹些企業實習，I went to work in some business companies during each of my vacation . I worked in Tianjin Sky Lion Biology development Co., Ltd from June 2005 to September 2005, as a direct sales agent.其中在2005年6月到9月，我在天津天獅生物發展有限公司從事直銷。2006年6月到9月，在武漢群光購物廣場學習營銷策劃，參與了商場暑期的壹些促銷策劃。From June 2006 to September 2006, I focused on sales strategies at Wuhan Quanguang Shopping Plaza.實習期間我的表現贏得了公司領導和同事的贊同。My outstanding performance during the student practical training had earned me the respect of my colleges and gained the approval of administrators of the companies.
我品性堅忍不拔，愛崗敬業，能吃苦，有魄力，工作中即能獨擋壹面，也能團結合作。
I am a girl of great character and wonderful temperament who enjoy splendid reputation for integrity, honesty, and loyalty. I am a hard working person. I could be an independent worker and I could be a great teamwork player, too. I am also a good problem solver.
我的人生理念是：“事在人為”。My philosophy is this: it is not what you say but what you do that counts. Please, could you kindly give me a chance to work for this great company? I really appreciate if you could take my request into consideration.
Thank you.
Sincerely yours,
汪圓
我基本遵照妳的原文.但有些詞我選用西方人較常用的如:integrity, honesty, and loyalty.另外,我幫妳加上"妳是解決問題的高手等.這也是在爭取某個職位或是工作時比教好也比較常見的詞,因為能解決問題問題的人就是有智商的人.最後幾句,我換成比教渴望,比較實在的請求.親真意切的說話是比咄咄逼人的說話更容易打動人心.希望能幫上妳.
祝福